Tuesday 11 February 2014

My kennings poem





       Reflection
I was learning how to write a kennings poem.
I felt a bit easy doing this learning, because I know myself well.
I didn't have so much trouble writing it,
the only one was remembering to write an before the vowels.
Next time I will remember to write an before vowels,
and edit it before the teacher checks.





















Monday 10 February 2014

My Did you Ever Poem



                                                                      

                                                               
                                                            Reflection
 I was learning how to write a Did You Ever poem.
I felt a bit confused doing this learning
because I wasn't sure about the sequence,
so I looked at the example.
I had some trouble thinking 
about interesting words,so next time
I think I need to look in a thesaurus.
I could also ask the teacher for some help on
interesting words. 



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Hi, my name is Lilian and I go to Elm Park School.  Welcome to my learning blog.  This is a place where I will share my learning, and I would love to hear your comments.  My favourite colours are purple and blue.  My favourite sport is badminton.  My favourite subject is art.  I live in Auckland.  I can't wait to share my amazing learning to you!